So I was just wondering if anyone could give me some feedback on the poem I just wrote. I'm undecided as to whether I like it or not. I like the abstract style but I'm not sure. Please tell me your thoughts!
A slither of hope multiplies
Into a cluster -- the writhing sense of
Depression disintegrates,
As though paper of an aged novel And crackling flames.
A breath, once shallow, now deep And warm - a growl - dominates
The underlying musk of a life once Lived.
Those potent cries of angst now lost
Into a multitude of comets and stars:
You have learned to let go,
Now facing the endless possibilities
Of a life once lost.
Thanks everyone!
